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Image result for writing I have also improved my commentary. One way I have improved in writing is relating my commentary back to my thesis. I have worked on my commentary in all of my projects for AP U.S. History writing essays. Other skills I have practiced are compound and complex sentences.
  This year as  a writer i have learned numerous strategies & tips to improve my writing. One thing that has had the biggest impact on my writing is the vocabulary i have learned.
  Vocabulary has improved my writing & and made it sound more professional. I believe that the number of projects i have written have also had an extensive impact on my work. Many vocabulary words I have used in my essays for AP History and English to improve my essays.
  I hope to improve my writing skills while going on with school and college.

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